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苏菲汉译英诗歌选(三) [温远辉 老巢 翼人 唐成茂 典裘...

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本帖最后由 Sophy-苏菲 于 2018-1-3 17:36 编辑

摘要:苏菲汉译英诗歌选(三),翻译了温远辉《天上的湖》、老巢《我像是遇见了另一个自己》、阿尔丁夫•翼人《骆驼泉》、唐成茂《与一滴水的邂逅相遇》、典裘沽酒《电影片段》、老刀《下辈子》。

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苏菲汉译英 [广东]温远辉诗歌《天上的湖》



[广东] 温远辉

《天上的湖》


一定是上天悲悯大地
垂落泪水,才有了这样的湖
这湖,水那么咸
比人间所有的泪水都咸
水那么青,是和青天
完全一样的颜色

这是最慈悲的湖呵。因为天慈悲
所以离天最近
云朵的手可以抚摸她
像抚摸孩子
波浪像绸缎一般柔曲
像给孩子梳头,让发髻鼓起
发丝四处流泻绵延
经幡被风吹动。多么宁静呵
低到尘土里的匍匐的颂祷声呵
一定能够传到天上

叩一生的长头来见你,从人间的低处
来到高原极地见你。浩瀚的西海
天上的湖。你这大地的圣杯呵
盛满了这么青这么深的慈悲
来到你身边,只轻轻闭一下眼睛
痛苦空了,尘埃也空了

心呵,清澈了盛满了空灵了
只是一滴泪,澄净而慈悲
只是一个湖,把所有人的心灵
提升到了青天

青海湖,天上的湖
谁也带不走你呵
无法把你从天上带走,也带不走呵
你的青你的净
带不走你的金黄色花环
只能呵,带走你的慈悲
一滴泪的慈悲,浩瀚的慈悲
上天的慈悲



[Guangdong] Wen Yuanhui

The Lake of Heaven


On earth it must be God who takes pity
To make such a lake with drawn tears
In the lake, its water is so salty
On earth than all the tears
The water is such blue as the sky
Exactly the same colors

This is the most merciful lake oh. The sky shows mercy
So it is the closet to the sky
Clouds can touch her by hands
As touching a child
Its waves is soft as a piece of silks and satins
As doing up a child’s hair, let the bud mustered
Hair pouring and stretching around
Prayer flag is blowing in the wind. How quiet oh
Low to the dust of the creeping sound of prayer oh
To the sky it will be able to spread

I kowtow in my whole life to see you, from the lower earth
To polar plateau I came to see you. The West Sea’s vastness,
The lake of heaven. Oh you’re the Holy Grail of the earth
Filled with such a green deep mercy
I come to you, just gently close my eyes
My pain is empty, the dust is also empty

Oh heart, is full of clear emptiness
Just a drop of tear is clear in mercy
Just a lake, rises everyone’s mind
Up to the blue sky

The Qinghai Lake, the Lake of heaven
Nobody can take you away, oh
Can take you away from the sky, also can take oh
Away your net your green
Take away your golden garland
But only oh, someone can take away your mercy
A drop of tear’s mercy, vast mercy
God’s mercy

(Translated by Sophy Chen)






苏菲汉译英 [中国]老巢诗歌《我像是遇见了另一个自己》



《我像是遇见了另一个自己》

老 巢


深夜
灯光忽明忽暗的街上
一中年男子
从穿着上看,和我一样
活在底层。他埋头走路没看见我
他边走边说着什么
声音很小只有他自己听见
他说着,不时露出笑容
我知道他的话
不是说给爱情就是说给梦想

2013-09-26



It seems that I’ve met another myself

Lao Chao


In the deep night
Lights flickering in the street
A middle-aged man
Judging from his clothes, as I look at me
He lives at the bottom of society. Walking, he does not see me
He said something while he walked
His voice is so low, which only he can hear
As he said, he had a smile from time to time
I know what he said
That is not to say to love, or say to dream

2013-09-26
Translated by Sophy Chen






苏菲汉译英 [中国]阿尔丁夫•翼人诗歌《骆驼泉》



[中国]阿尔丁夫•翼人

《骆驼泉》


在巍巍的乌土斯山下,
有一汪清澈的涟漪,
儿时,我搂着祖母的脖子,
问她:“这泉水流向哪里?”

她给我讲起了遥远的往事:
来自撒马尔罕的尕勒莽兄弟……
我听着、听着,朦胧入睡,
梦中,笑出了一丝甜蜜……

今天,我终于回到驼泉旁,
眼前展现一片神奇的土地,
这里有耕耘,也有收获,
这里有阳光,也有风雨。

我在那古老的石驼峰间,
找到了家乡的小溪。
早年失落的童稚的梦,
又闪现在驼泉的清波里。



[China] ALDINGFU YIREN

The Camel Spring


At the foot of the lofty Wutusi mountain,
There is a clear ripple.
Hugging my grandma’s neck, in my childhood,
“Where does the spring flow to?” I asked.

She told me a tale about a distant past:
The two brothers of Karamanids from Samarkand…
I Listened, and listened, into a hazy sleep to be fallen
With a hint of sweetness, in my Dream I smiled …

Today, to the camel spring I finally returned.
In my eyes, a magical land
There is the hard planting, harvest
The sun shine and also the storm.

In the ancient stone camel hunchback,
I found my hometown’s brook.
Also my early lost childish dreams
On the clear water of the camel spring flashes.






苏菲汉译英 [广东]唐成茂诗歌《与一滴水的邂逅相遇》



[广东]唐成茂

《与一滴水的邂逅相遇》


名字与名分溶入水中  就不会回头
不管是一滴水还是一湖水  都生长着灵魂的骨头
上善若水  穿越骨子  划破刀子  没有棱角  抓不住缰绳

在桃花村  与一滴透明的水邂逅相遇
桃花纷纷扬扬  如雨带梨花  让我的梦想晶莹透亮
这滴桃花水款款滴落  会惊起桃花梦  
洒向桃林  天空会有一丝晃动
转一个弯  落在我的履历上  人生就有了动静

一滴轻盈的水和一枚温情的桃花相遇的故事  
零落成泥  也有一段传奇
柔软与纯洁也会刺痛坚强  骨子里的坚定和坚强对峙锋芒和锋利
就是悬在檐颚下  挂在石壁上  就是没有飞流直下的悲烈
一滴水陪伴一枚桃花缓缓流动的青春  也是一首动人的抒情诗

与一枚桃花邂逅相遇  一滴水在晴明或黑暗中  咏唱恒远与忠诚
就是没有妙曼的身姿和骨头里的笙歌  
就是只有头破血流也要奔流的勇气  
以及不让生命向生活低头的骨气  也令我臣服

这是人生的雨水  在叮叮咚咚地滴落
不管谁与之相遇  都关乎这个人一辈子的成败  
这个人一辈子都会有似水柔情



[Guangdong]Tang Chengmao

With a Drop of Water I Encountered


When your name and status dissolved in the water, they would go back not
Whether it is a drop of water or a lake, which grows the soul of bones
As good as water, through the bones, cutting knife, no edges, it grips not the reins

In the Peach Blossom Village, with a drop of transparent water I encountered
Peach flowers swirling, as raining with pear flowers, let my dreams brilliantly shining
The drops of peach blossom water is leisurely dropping, which can startle the peach blossom dreams
Sprinkling to peach woods, so in the sky there is a trace of rocking
It turns a corner and falls on my resume, and then in life there will be a sound

A story of encounter about a drop of light water and a warm peach blossom
Even if they scattered into the mud, there also has a legend
Softness and pureness will sting firmness, which in bones resist on spearhead and keenness
Even if it hangs under the eaves’ jaw and on cliffs, and even if there is no sad fierce as strong waterfalls
The slowly flowing youth, a peach blossom accompanied by a drop of water, is a touching lyrics

With a peach blossom I encountered, a drop of water, in sunny day or darkness, sings permanency and loyalty
Even if there is no lithe and graceful body appearance and no playing and singing in bones
Even if there is only courage to flush with one's head broken and bleeding
And there is a moral integrity that does not let life bow to live, which makes me submit myself to the rule of it

This is the rain water of life which tinkling down drops
No matter who met with them is related to the person’s life success
So a lifetime for this person, there will be the tender feelings






苏菲汉译英 [广东]典裘沽酒诗歌《电影片段》



[广东]典裘沽酒

《电影片断》


我吃饭的时候
电视里出现了一个小码头
德国党卫军正在枪杀犹太人
旁边有个男人拉着小提琴
在优美的琴声中
犹太人一个个倒在河里
枪声就像伴奏声

最后一个倒在河里的人
就是那拉小提琴的人
他是唯一在没有琴声中被枪杀的人
最后的枪声在码头上
显得格外的刺耳



[Guangdong] Dianqiu Gujiu

A Movie Clip


When I was having my dinner
In TV, appeared a small dock
Schutzstaffel were gunning down Jews
Near, a man was playing the violin
In the beautiful music
The Jews collapsed into a river one by one
Gunshot just like the accompaniment

A person finally collapsed into the river
Was just the man playing the violin
He was the only person gunned down without music
The final gunshot, in the dock
Was especially jarring

Translated by Sophy Chen 2014-12-22






苏菲汉译英 [广东]老刀诗歌《下辈子》



[广东] 老刀

《下辈子》


如果可以选择,
下辈子,我愿意做只蚂蚁。
一只蚂蚁多好,
一条缝隙可以是他的家园,
一颗小树可以是他的祖国。
只是不要做牛、做马,做害虫。
我最怕做的还是狗。
一条狗,
可以随意被主人捕杀。
被捅上一刀之后,
狗可以挣脱,可以逃跑,
可以远走他乡。
一条狗,
他又能逃到哪儿呢?
逃到你的家乡是野狗,
逃到我的家乡是丧门之犬。
怎么也逃脱不出狗的命运。
我总是觉得,
我就是那条被捅杀过一刀的老狗。
他挣脱过,
他好像得救了,自由了。
他在村子里一边逃跑,
一边痛苦地喊叫。
他跑着跑着放慢了脚步,
总感觉,
有根无形的绳子在拉着他。
他跑着跑着,
又回到了村庄,
在捕杀他的主人跟前,
又摇起了尾巴。



[Guangdong] Laodao

The Next Life


If I may choose
In my next life, I would be an ant
How nice to be an ant
A crack may be his family
A tiny tree may be his country
Only don’t to be a cattle, horse and pest
A dog is what I’m scared to be the most
A dog
May be caught to kill casually by his master
After he’s stabbed by a knife
He may get rid of, may escape
May go away to others’ hometown
A dog
Where he can escape?
To escape to your hometown is called as a pie-dog
To escape to my hometown is called as a doomful dog
Whatever he does, he can’t escape the fate of the dog
I always feel that
I’m just that old stabbed dog
He has struggled himself to free
It seems that he’s been saved and freed
In the village while he is fleeing
He is sadly shouting
He’s been gradually slowing his pace
He always feels that
He’s been pulling by an invisible rope
He is running, running
Then back to his village
And in front of his master stabbed him
With his tail shaking

Translated by Sophy Chen 2013-09-28 revised in 2015-04-03


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